Hmm... something is missing...

Hmm... somehow just find that something is missing from my earlier posted LO for May Challenge of Ed's Sketch, then it came to me, I missed out more inking! Have redone my LO and think it looks better... at least to myself...


What do you think? Pls give me opinion how I can improve my LO better, I'm simply bad at 12"x12" LO...